Tuesday, May 18, 2010

2am Saturday morning

New speech to be spoken in Elevators only and tonight at my business course.

The first attempt was at 2am on Sat morning (quite tipsy obviously) and this guy from Nike who I collared to help me (turns out he is the global creative director and really senior, good find on my part) We came up with this: (this is the original one, took us about 2 hours)

Welcome to yo v.
I lo ve beautiful clothes and I know how great it feels to buy something unique
Tv a greater way of getting that speciual killer piece to suit your
style right now
I set y v up because I believe ...
I've always loved shopping for clothes and grew up on London one of
the most fagionabkr cities inthe world my work has taken t
me to Paris ny venez tonighta a really spec might for me it's the
first uv preview.
Tonigt I'm going to show you 10! Looks that represent the tv brand
Collections

Then I decided to come up with this refined one, once the headache had gone (but in hindsight I should have read the first one):

I’m a buyer and seller of vintage clothing through my online website SHOPYOVINTAGE.COM. I grew up in London one of the most fashionable cities in the world and my work has taken me to Paris, New York, Venezuela and now I’m really excited to be living here.

The unique pieces that I’ve collected from my travels are available to buy from my online store that delivers worldwide and also here at new monthly Poppe Up Shops in Portland, this summer.

I love vintage shopping and I know how great it feels to buy something special and unique. Yo Vintage is that greater way of getting that beautiful piece of clothing straight to your doorstep – that has been pre altered, presorted, pre cleaned and preserved especially to suit your style.

p.s. PRE is my new favourite word, clearly.

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